That was great. Girls can be abusive too and I know that from experience. You did a good job at potraying his feelings. It would be nice if you added another chapter with her thoughts and feelings, seeing as your one-shot made me wanna see things from her side. Also, when you love someone truly and deeply you don't care about things like this at first and you try to cope with the situations believing things will get better but after years when the glass is broken and there's no way to fix it, you finally say "I'm done" even though it hurts you. Good job. <3
February 14th, 2013 at 07:14pm