Charmed, I'm Sure - Comments

  • unknownxcelebrity

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    Every single person has used a word that I shall not repeat simply because I love to be different.

    This reminded me of a vacation I took to St. Augustine last year, the hostel I was staying at with my friends was communial, like the dorm. There was also one guy playing a guitar, of course he was in the rec room not the kitchen, but whatever.

    It was simple, sweet, and something else I already vowed not to say.

    Normally, I find that when someone writes in first person from a male's point of view on this website (whether they're female or not) they always sound like girl TRYING to be a man. It's just weird.

    Not this story. You got the emotions right and the thoughts correct.

    GOOD JOB.
    June 7th, 2010 at 09:26am
  • HeWasFiction

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    This is very cute :]
    April 10th, 2010 at 07:55pm
  • ShallWeDance?

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    It was cute. Good job.
    April 10th, 2010 at 06:47pm
  • Hooray Say The Roses

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    Very cute.

    I'm curious.
    April 10th, 2010 at 06:46pm
  • RushKnob

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    I agree with Voilet Writer, this was adorable in the sense of a moment between two strangers.
    I love it, write more.
    April 10th, 2010 at 06:39pm
  • The Violet Writer

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    This is pretty cute. Definately want more! :)
    April 10th, 2010 at 06:34pm