Every single person has used a word that I shall not repeat simply because I love to be different.
This reminded me of a vacation I took to St. Augustine last year, the hostel I was staying at with my friends was communial, like the dorm. There was also one guy playing a guitar, of course he was in the rec room not the kitchen, but whatever.
It was simple, sweet, and something else I already vowed not to say.
Normally, I find that when someone writes in first person from a male's point of view on this website (whether they're female or not) they always sound like girl TRYING to be a man. It's just weird.
Not this story. You got the emotions right and the thoughts correct.
This reminded me of a vacation I took to St. Augustine last year, the hostel I was staying at with my friends was communial, like the dorm. There was also one guy playing a guitar, of course he was in the rec room not the kitchen, but whatever.
It was simple, sweet, and something else I already vowed not to say.
Normally, I find that when someone writes in first person from a male's point of view on this website (whether they're female or not) they always sound like girl TRYING to be a man. It's just weird.
Not this story. You got the emotions right and the thoughts correct.
GOOD JOB.