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  • EmptyInside

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    soo. it was a pretty good story. kind of clashed together at some parts and didnt add up. but its petty good.
    December 11th, 2011 at 10:10am
  • xerinxelizabethx17

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    FINISHED! WOOH!.... except... i want more... update the sequel! pease?
    December 12th, 2010 at 10:00pm
  • xerinxelizabethx17

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    NOOO! ALICE NEEDS TO GO BACK TO THE VENUE RIGHT. NOW!
    December 12th, 2010 at 09:53pm
  • xerinxelizabethx17

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    You deserve so much better than a cheating piece of shit like him.

    THATS DEFF WHAT ALEX WOULD SAY! You're writing him very well. I love this story ^.^ *goes back to reading*
    December 12th, 2010 at 09:18pm
  • xerinxelizabethx17

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    i love the fact that its just letters back and forth at the moment! it's so cool(for lack of a better word to say) ahaha <3
    December 12th, 2010 at 09:11pm
  • xerinxelizabethx17

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    teheh just read the first few chapters, and im loving it already * subscribes*
    December 12th, 2010 at 09:05pm
  • MiMi29

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    I love your story pleazzzzzzzzzzzz rite a sequel!!
    October 4th, 2010 at 07:31am
  • Muzik.Freek

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    Sooooo.....could we possibly have that sequel you mentioned?
    September 20th, 2010 at 01:46pm
  • WoahBroWoah

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    i would love love love love love a sequel! :) i LOVE this story!
    August 21st, 2010 at 04:33pm
  • chickirockx101

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    More of the story please? Didn't walk my dog so I could finish this story! Poor doggy! I love the idea, shame I hadn't thought of it!
    August 10th, 2010 at 07:16pm
  • BeatGoesKristen

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    Your character gets on my nerves x.x

    Buuutt, I love the layout and the idea :]]
    July 30th, 2010 at 08:53pm
  • Justmewifcookie

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    SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL! PLLLLZZ :)
    July 30th, 2010 at 01:52pm
  • YouClickedYourHeels

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    Cuuute (: I'm glad they met!
    I kinda agree with MeBeManda?.
    July 30th, 2010 at 03:46am
  • jerseyxemoxgirl

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    ahh i cant wait until "tomorrow" when they see eachother!!=DDD
    July 30th, 2010 at 03:45am
  • MissPunkRawk

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    This is a good story so it should end as a good story. I think a sequel would start to make the storyline cliche and be like a lot of the other stories out there. But that's just my opinion...
    July 30th, 2010 at 12:54am
  • crazy.sexy.cool

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    sequel. yes please :)
    July 29th, 2010 at 10:58pm
  • All.Time.Music

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    please please please do a sequel
    i love the story, and i dont want to see this end
    July 29th, 2010 at 10:51pm
  • MissPunkRawk

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    Yes! They finally meet! Much Much love for this story!
    July 29th, 2010 at 03:36am
  • musiclovex3

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    yayyy!! they met, sorta went on a date, well a pinic and they kissed!
    it was cute.
    update soon pleeeeease!! =]
    July 28th, 2010 at 06:55am
  • jerseyxemoxgirl

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    they kissed
    THEY KISSED
    WOOOOOOO WOOOOO WOOOO=DDDDDDD
    July 28th, 2010 at 06:07am
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