No More Cutting - Comments

LOVEDDDD IT.

I adored the entire tone of it - it's so bitter and sarcastic.

It was an interesting angle - portraying Gerard as a hypocritical, pathetic liar. I loved that, it was so refreshing - usual My Chem fics have Gerard made out to be this beautiful, misunderstood hero [including mine...>.<], so it was great to read one where he is despised.

And that ending.
''Oh well. At least you’ve stopped cutting.

Then again, you’ve stopped breathing, too.''

Heh, perfect. Made me smile. Those lines reflected the narrator's sheer hatred and mocking callousness.

Throughout the whole thing, I got the feeling that Gerard had committed suicide, but I loved the twist you added where the narrator [who was that?] actually killed him.

COOL.8)

I like it, I really do. Janie here thinks it's not bad, too. :D
I really, really liked the end.
"Then again, you've stopped breathing. too."
I laughed.
I'm partial to your oneshots, for whatever reason. I think I should check out your longer ones too. You're amazing.

that was awesome...
damn, I use that word too much so...
That was real powerful, and I definately couldn't tear my eyes from the screen until I had finished reading. I think my mom was talking to me, but oh well

I loved it. I don't know why, but I really, really, did love it. :)

Frank, right?

Again... an amazing story by Horsie890. But then again, what else did I expect?

Xoxo

I read that, and I was like....WOW.
Its actually 'original'!
*gasp*
I loved it.

You sure know how to write angst, that's for sure. And make it powerful!
The ending... is a real shocker. You'd be surprised that I wasn't expecting that at all. Haha.

That was so awesome.
Made me feel like I was yelling at him.
It was really good.
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Somehow, the end didn't surprise me. I mean, it did, but you prepared us well enough so it fit. You know I love your stories, but I think I like your other stories better than this one. But, I did like the perspective... I'll tell you my thoughts in full elsewhere ;D

Oh please, please be Bob talking!!!!

LOL @ octa... this is the kind of things one would like to tell him... maybe thats the reason behind all those random slaps LMAO

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reading that made me feel like i'm really bitching on Gerard. amazing!

That was...powerful.
Right off the bat I felt as though I almost knew exactly what was happening, the problems that had arised.
And the ending? My god.
"Oh well. At least you’ve stopped cutting.
Then again, you’ve stopped breathing, too."
Priceless.