oh wow, I know this is a short story, but MAN could this make a killer story with a begining like this!! or this could even be the middle of the story and have a beggining lead up to this, or this be the begining and he (im guessing it was a he, could be wrong) move away or something or i dont know lol this made me want to read more and i accidently invented a whole pre story and then the rest of it in my head XD
December 27th, 2011 at 04:24am