Fury. - Comments

I loved how dark and twisted the story was. Vicky was deliciously insane, and I loved her. Something about the rocking horse, and the way she talked about it made me smile, and yeah, that sounds kind of crazy. I really liked how it ended, how her mother died in the end. It was a very poetic ending, I think.

The banner in the layout was really gorgeous. I loved it, it fit the story so well. I noticed a few grammar mistakes here and there, but really, it's nothing a Beta couldn't fix. All in all, it really was a lovely oneshot.

That was so incredibly devious and crazy, but I loved it. It was like a build up of emotions that she couldn't hold any longer, and it burst. Your descriptions were amazing and I didn't expect for the story to have so much potential, I also that that the premise was great and fairly uncommon. Usually the good person escapes, but there was a twist here. And I liked it, very, very well done. I loved it.

Vicky is crazy!
This was awesome :)
It was well descriptive and I liked that.
I loved the plot, you have good ideas :D

This is very well done =D

That Vicky's a crazy bitch xD

I loved it, nice wording, great imagery and well written. TOLD YOU THAT YOU COULD WRITE.

But you spelt furry wrong.

Win win win :']

You should write a sequel