August 24th, 2010 at 02:56am
That was so incredibly devious and crazy, but I loved it. It was like a build up of emotions that she couldn't hold any longer, and it burst. Your descriptions were amazing and I didn't expect for the story to have so much potential, I also that that the premise was great and fairly uncommon. Usually the good person escapes, but there was a twist here. And I liked it, very, very well done. I loved it.
The banner in the layout was really gorgeous. I loved it, it fit the story so well. I noticed a few grammar mistakes here and there, but really, it's nothing a Beta couldn't fix. All in all, it really was a lovely oneshot.