Price Check On Monogamy - Comments

  • swell

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    When I first saw this story in the stories section, I was thinking that there was no point bothering with it because it was way too long for me to read. Nonetheless I chose it anyways and began reading, and now a day later I have come to find how addicted I am to this story. Tiger's personality holds a lot of spunk, and while I originally thought Tandem was the biggest asshole to walk the planet, I want him and Tiger to be together. Tyler is too much of a pussy - no match for Tiger, and Milo is too unpredictable for her. Tandem on the other hand is the right amount of crazy and cute and you can just see how much he cares for Tiger.

    I find Milo and Tyler to be quite annoying, to be honest. Tandem Ftw.

    I hope you never lose inspiration for this; tbh I think I'd be extremely down if you did. You're a brilliant writer :)
    December 4th, 2011 at 12:33pm
  • carry.me.home.

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    Gah. Milo pisses me off.
    Hi. I'm a new reader by the way. :) i just got all caught up.
    I've wanted her with Tandem from the start. And i kept getting soooo pissed when Tyler would pop up. XD he irritates me almost as much as Milo. He just seemed too perfect
    December 4th, 2011 at 12:21am
  • mcince51

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    her and Tandem have to get back together :'(
    December 2nd, 2011 at 01:53am
  • Parfaitavectoi

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    So good! Update soon! And I would LOVE to see her with Tandem or Jeremy :)
    November 29th, 2011 at 07:51pm
  • Oh!

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    I've just finished reading all the chapters and I love the story so far! Would it be weird if I said I want to see her get together with Jeremy? The guy deserves some lovin' ;) Haha, but I still love Tandem! Can't wait for more!
    November 29th, 2011 at 10:47am
  • topless

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    I love this story.

    Go Tiger! I love how she kept going back to the mosaic she made him. Pure awesome.

    I wanna see her with Jeremy, lmao, I don't know why. I love Tandem, but...yeah. :)

    This story = crack. (Because it's addicting. Lol.)
    November 29th, 2011 at 07:13am
  • Baby.Blue.Eyes

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    I feel like Tiger was kind of a bitch to Tandem. It was obvious there was more to the story between his and Kips kiss. Even if he really had been cheating on her ther had to have been a story and ithink Tiger forgets that there are two sides to every story. Its all about perspective. And unlike all the other characters in the story I feel like Tandem did change and I feel like Tiger should have let him stay and talk things out. I get that she was upset but they already clarified that Kip kissed Tandem and instead of her asking him why or letting him explain his side of the story she shut him out. I really want to see them together but they both have a lot of flaws to work out. In this situation I feel like Tiger was wrong and even though it hurts the mature thing to do would have been to hear him out. Well that's all I have to say :)
    November 29th, 2011 at 04:35am
  • sarahm598

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    i wanna see her back with tandem i love them!...probably not gonna happen though :(
    November 28th, 2011 at 11:06pm
  • SweetCyanide93

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    I would kind of like to see Eli make a move. Just saying cause I like him ^_^
    November 28th, 2011 at 09:38pm
  • SweetCyanide93

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    For some odd reason I didn't get a notification that this way updated. Weird 0.o? Anyways... WTH! Kip why? :o Tiger no! :O And poor Tandem :C (I like putting the little faces) UpDaTe soon!
    November 28th, 2011 at 07:29pm
  • CaliforniaShadows

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    Awesome story :) so please update soon cuz I'm dying to know what happens next :)
    November 22nd, 2011 at 07:06am
  • shellieann

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    Good Story. Update soon, please.
    November 19th, 2011 at 01:20am
  • SweetCyanide93

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    update soon, okay!
    November 18th, 2011 at 01:24am
  • Monica Beth

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    nice chapter :D
    please update soon?
    November 15th, 2011 at 11:26pm
  • Katrina;

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    I love this story! It's a very original plot. :)
    November 9th, 2011 at 11:35pm
  • Monica Beth

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    Is it bad that it took me approximately about 2 minutes to read the chapter? xD
    I liked this one by a lot! My favourite chapter from you so far!
    November 9th, 2011 at 01:03pm
  • Monica Beth

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    I think it's time you make your main characters not look too flat and change them a to be more rounded. They're too flat.
    I like the story. I think you should make it a bit more detailed by adding adjectives and a not too obvious description of them.
    The rivalry between Calem and Katy towards Tiger is a bit too exaggerated. I mean, you can't really change who you like better in your family because of the crowd you hang around with. Just because Tandem(?) came in and became friends with Calem shouldn't have changed the relationship between Tiger and Calem should've been a lot more stronger than this newfound friendship. I don't know, I don't find it that plausible.
    Other than that and a few other minor details, I think the story is interesting and I'd like to see how it will be developed further.
    I sort of wanted to have Tiger end up with Tyler but he seems to be so unstable.
    Tandem has yet to really change himself.
    I would like to see the relationships she shares with her parents. Time for her parents to finally come back home, isn't it?
    November 9th, 2011 at 12:29am
  • SweetCyanide93

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    This is amazing. I lOve it :) subbing
    November 7th, 2011 at 05:46pm
  • CarterLynn

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    I'm so sorry I haven't commented on this!
    For some reason I haven't been getting notices when you update.
    I really love the new chapters and Tandem and Tiger's "relationship" is way cute.
    Keep updating!
    December 16th, 2010 at 07:46pm
  • writing.

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    Write more please! :))
    December 1st, 2010 at 01:20pm