Just Break the Silence - Comments

This was really very beautiful, yet quite mysterious.
You have a nice, descriptive way with your words.
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I actually thought it made a lot of sense. That is, after I read it a second time. xD

Anyways, I loved the descriptive language you used. Especially the opening and closing paragraphs, all of it. Those were my favorite bits of the story. I liked how you kept it purposefully vague as far as Matt went. It wasn't blatantly fanfiction. Also, the way you weaved song lyrics seamlessly into the story was fantastic. I liked that too.

The only part I was a little iffy on was how she regained her hearing. There didn't seem to be much of a valid medical reason for it, besides the Healing Powers of Matthew Bellamy, TM. That's probably just due to the fact that I was brought up listening to my mother talk about nursing. And I'm a bit of a perfectionist. I get that you're not a medical professional or anything, so I'll leave it alone. Really, that was a bit nit-picky of me anyways. (:

It was really good though. To steal a phrase, that was brilliant. <3

Dash, that was so confusingly amazing.

I'll pop back here with a pwoper review later, but yeah. That was brilliant. <3