How It Hurts in the Worst Way - Comments

First off, the layout is a bit awkward. It wasn’t exactly hard to read, but the colors didn’t match all that well. It didn’t detract from your actual writing, however. I really, really loved the emotion in all of this. It was really heartbreaking, and even though I didn’t know your characters at all, I connected to them. I thought it was sort of stupid that Ronnie didn’t fight off Craig a bit harder. Stupid Craig, gah! But look, you’ve got me cussing at your characters, which something I don’t do very often…very nice job! I really liked it. :D

So Shay told us you have doubts about this story? How can you have doubts? The story was written beautifully, the beginning absolutely heart wrenching as Max was forced to watch the love of his life get dragged away from him. And his downward spiral into Craig's arms was absolutely perfect. It was incredible, watching him fall apart at the seams, and I feel bad for Craig because I know there's no way he can make Max happy. Max's heart belongs to Ronnie, and no one else. I just hope he and Ronnie talk again, and that they can forgive each other and be together again. :'(

How can you even think this isn't good? HOW? This story is absolutely amazing, and you captured Max's confused emotions perfectly. Running to Craig, how devastating it was to tell Ronnie. . . It was all perfect. <3 And I love Craigafer to death, but he should have known better than to pull a stunt like that when Max is obviously still hurting. And waiting four days. God. *shakes head* I'm disappointed in him. If he truly cared for Max, he would have known to wait.

The whole story is beautifully written, detailing such an intimate downward spiral, and I still can't believe you didn't think this was good. It's beautiful, and the ending absolutely made my throat close up the first time I read it. All I could do was cry quietly for everything Max and Ronnie had lost.

This was absolutely lovely, Katie girl. <3

Absolutely amazing. Heartbreaking and tragic, but I loved it. By far one of my favorites =D

WHAT?!? THATS IT?! ARE YOU EFFING KIDDING ME?!?!? MAX DID NOT DESERVE THAT, nor did Ronnie, stupid mothereffing craig, gah!!! Katie friking katastrophe, you never told me it would have a bad ending.....!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Your writing is amazing, BUT GAH ITS JUST SO SAD!!!???!!!???! How could you do that..? He was trying so hard to figure out his schiz and then frikin craig's evil twin comes along and ruin everything........

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kjfhskdjvh,sjfvgydjvyhgfjgyawueydgw!!!! D': One more chapter! Please!? I feel so bad for Max! I know he made a mistake, but still! DX