AWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!! I absolutely love this story!!!! But I don't like where it's going!!!!!! The Cullen's and the pack NEED to jump in and take her back!!!!!!!!! Just thinking of what Aro is gonna do is creeping me out.....
It's the whole 'english no comprehende' that gets me every single time =D I don't know why... but there is just SOMEthing about not being able to communicate with others that just makes me wanna reeeeeaaaaddd =D (Just so you know, I don't usually read fan fics.... but yours is superb!!! And I am definitely subscribing)
you should definitely put chapters of her new life and please tell me that stefan is her imprint because how you described her meeting him sounded like it
I'm terribly sorry about your Gramma's, and I wouldn't even THINK of unsubscribing. =] I love this story WAY too much.. I also think you should keep going with her new life, and maybe teach her to speak english and italian because of the Volturi. Also, the point of view change is no issue at all =] It makes the story really interesting <3 And take your time, life gets hard. We won't rush <3
Awwwww.. Thats so cute, then it got all hectic >.< omigod... If you need any ideas for the story you can ask me =] Im sorry about your situation. I went through the same last year =[ But this is an amazing story. <3333
I love the chapter...... I will pray for your grandma.... I know how it feels ,my grandma just got out of a surgery .... we don't know how it will end up....... : (
I read your authors note for chapter 10, and I totally understand what your going through. Last year, my Grandpa was also in and out of the hospital with tumors. Sadly, he had recieved cancer from the tumors, and had to take Kemo. He died soon after. He was, just like your Grandma, what held our family together, so ive said a silent prayer, and hope for the best for your Grandma =] This may not mean much from a stranger, but tell her to get better for me <3
Was I the only one who thought that it jumped right from Volturi hell to Paul screwing another chick? It would have been nice to have a little build like she was walking through the forest and got Paul's sent and went to check it out or something I just felt a little thrown into that. But I really like the way this story is going, it's very different and that's refreshing. Can't wait, update soon! ~Taste