A good girl in a bad world...(Joe Jonas love story) - Comments

Untold Story (100)

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I hate joe. grrr he's an ass. lol. he'll get nicer tho rite?

May 31st, 2010 at 07:32pm

Untold Story (100)

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love it so far

May 31st, 2010 at 07:28pm

Untold Story (100)

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love it so far

May 31st, 2010 at 07:28pm

Eden. (100)

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Miny I love it!! :D

May 5th, 2010 at 05:46pm

Eden. (100)

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That -that was awesome. Please tell me she doesn't give in? Tense and edgy moment . . .

April 14th, 2010 at 05:13am

Eden. (100)

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cute update :)

April 13th, 2010 at 05:57pm

Eden. (100)

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I like it - it has the potential for being really quite excellent.
Just one tiny thing you could fix - it's a little more like a script then a story but you only need to add sensory details and make it a little more dialogue-ish.

Other then that I can't wait to see what you do with this - Keep it up :)

April 13th, 2010 at 05:45pm