When the Lights Go Dim - Comments

This was very well written! I enjoyed reading it. Good job.

First of all, this was very well-written. Very interesting and I really enjoyed it :)

Aw, this was awesome. I love it, too. You got talent. I can say that a thousand times more :D

I quite enjoyed reading this.

However at one part I was rather comfused, how did he get her number?
I may of not just read it properly or whatever.

I found it hard to read because the text was tiny.

There was not a lot of description, which is good in some cases

But other wise, it was really good. <3 :D

This was really, really well-written. I love how much was communicated in such a small amount of words. Good job!

Okay, I loved this.

Garrett spent his whole life leaving.
The first line grabbed my attention, which was great.
It made me want to know what was going on.

There weren't many descriptions and it was a slightly simple read, but that's what made it great.
It flowed together well and the title and layout were very pretty.
I'd love to read more from you.

He wanted someone that would make him stay, someone that would root him in one place and make him never want to leave again.

Then came Providence.
Oh my, that was my favourite part in this whole one-shot. It was beautiful in so little words.

Amazing job.