October 20th, 2017 at 08:11am
So I just found this and... ugh. I'm so sad with where it stopped! I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENSSSS... Ugh, the curiosity is killing me. Do they end up together or not?!?!
This is seriously such an amazingly written story. You're a great writer! I really hope someday you come back to this and finish it... I think it deserves an ending, even if it's just one final chapter.
Such a cute story. I will be here if you ever choose to finish it. <3
lol, not really. Or, well, kind of. It is torture. XD
But yes, I just loved this so much the first time, I wanted to read it again, and ughhhh... I'M STILL SO BUMMED IT WAS NEVER FINISHED. :( Still dying for an explanation from Alex for that last show/encounter... still wanting them to talk it out because it just all seemed like a huge misunderstanding, sigh. Or I'm really hoping it was, anyway, and it seems that way since he wouldn't stop calling her. Just, ugh, he needs to prove his love in person! :( I need to see one more showdown where Jess tells him her feelings, showing him how much he hurt her to make him realize the full damage, and then just see the results from that (hopefully positive). That would help fulfill the ending that this is missing, plus, it would definitely show the character development for Jess, showing how she changed from the beginning to now with her confidence.
You're seriously an amazing writer, which should be obvious since I'm coming back to this without any new update, and reading just because I stumbled across it again and wanted to read it. :P Please, please consider writing at least one final update to wrap things up, especially considering it seemed like you were so close to completing it. Give the story the conclusive ending it deserves.
... I can't remember if you ever responded to my first comment, so I'm not even sure you'll see this, but I wanted to leave feedback again anyway. Alex and Jess's relationship is just <3 <3 <3, I love it so much and loved reading this again. I am still here if you ever do choose to continue it, and I will definitely leave feedback again as well.
Hoping this second comment can maybe bring some inspiration. <3