Your Lips Are a Hot Flame - Comments

WHAT. THE. ACTUAL. FUCK.
Seriously Alex, what are you doing?! You're meant to be with Jack! Not fucking Caleb! This better be a really weird phase thingy that Alex gets over once he realises he does love Jack, or ELSE!
YOU MUST FIX THIS. PLEASE UPDATE!

ps. Hey I'm a new reader btw, just read this and the prequel in one go, love it :)

EFIURNGIURHG
OMG
i mean, fuck, caleb is adorable and like idguheriugh
BUT WHAT THE FUCK. I don't even know.

FIX
THIS
SOON
or i will cry.
naw, i won't cry.
but i mean.

poor alex. :(
And poor jack too.

UPDATE!!! !!

NO!
This a Jack/Alex not a Alex/Caleb!
This is not allowed!
Jack didnt mean to do that to Alex!
Grrr...and I agree with lilmissmileen that you need to fixx this!
But you should make Alex suffer a little for being a douche:-)

Don't kill you?

ALE KISSED CALEB! noijchdiosnvcokdsn no. just no. I can't even... no. Not allowed.

Fix it please?

:(

uhoh i sense drama! just finished reading our chemistry and started this straight away, hope yu update soon as im addicted! caleb needs to go home and leave jalex alone yo! hehe

So much drama! D:
Update soon.

aweh that was super sweet. :3 update again sooon, guys.

Awehhh.

Aw, that made me sad:-(
Poor Alex!
Poor Jack!
More soon:-)

Ahh update!! i dont want them to break up or anything :(

Poor Lexxiii.

AND WHY IS IT THAT I'M THE ONLY ONE COMMENTING SO FAR?
those bitches.

Oh hey
this did not suck. This was...I can't find words to describe this.
Updatee soon:)

yuuuuum:)

this is amaing!
i loved it, is there gonna be more???
i hope so XD *is all giddy*

I liked this ^^
*subscribes*
more soon? 0=]

That did NOT suck! well... Alex did, but you know what I meant. = )
definitely not a fail.
moresoon?

Ohmygosh
yuuuum
and you did NOT suck
hehehehe, ignore the pun
{you didn't suck, Alex did...}
bahahaha
Anywaaaaaaayyy
so like
I was reading
and i was like
YAYAYAYAYAYAYA
and then you stopped
and I was like
are
you
fo
serious?
You ended it there?
I mean
they couldve have itense
gay
shower
sex
and that wouldve been amazing
hehehehe
yeah
so
I loved this update
and I was hoping
that
you could update again soon?

ps: in subscribing, if you didn't guess.

YAY!
I've been awaiting this sequel :D
I can't wait for more!