If a River Could Talk - Comments

I loved the story! It was very meaningful and creative. I liked that you took the perspective of the river-very different. Good job!

It was a very creative story. A few errors, but it was amazing. Some things like this can actually turn out cliched, but never did. It was magical in its own way, and yet it wasn't silly with unicorns or fairies or anything like that. It was... a natural kind of magic, one that people rarely use or understand how to incorporate- but you did a great job with that, and that's serious talent!
This is seriously one of a kind and well done. I'm glad I could read itbecause it was so.... so YOU. I don't know you, but because of this, I feel like I know a little part of you, and thats what great writers can do. You did something so...so personally different, and shared it.
Great job, thanks!

~I'm judging for my One Shot Prewrites Contest~

Firstly: the rules. The link to my contest was there, grammar was mainly good and the layout was nice and clear. The picture was relevant and really pretty.

The idea of this story is so unique, I urge you to keep it on here, don't delete it! Mibba is host to many of the same type os fics, but this is something truly special.
I loved the way the water moved and protected her; it seems like such a gentle things; but this story shows it holds a lot of power. I won't look at water the same way again now. How you spoke as the water capitalising Us and Our; it created really unity and personified the water brilliantly.

My favourite bit, when you repeated the same line, with the extra:
Our Little Veronica, all grown up.

Ageing still, but no one to age with

Well done!
Keep checking the comp page for the results!

Omg this was like The Giving Tree! :D It was such a sweet story too, I love how it was told from the River's POV, it was a very cool idea. ;]

This was really nice; I love stories from unusual perspectives.
It reminded me of the Giving Tree actually, a children’s book I used to read a lot when I was little :)
Thanks for reminding me of that and thanks so much for your wonderful review of Season to Love!

This was so sweet. I really enjoyed this. I liked how the perspective was from the river - it was a really neat concept.

Good luck with the contest!