I didn't click on the ring link, but I followed the Tyler thing and wow. That's all I have to say. Just WOW.
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Dear lord, I sound like such a pervert. Anywhooz, I noticed that you had message instead of massage? And apart from a few missing commas here and there, this was most probably the cutest, loveliest story I've ever read here.
The whole time I was reading, I was scared that there was going to be some crazy, tragically horrible twist that would make me cry. My heart was literally pounding in my chest. And that ferris wheel thing was just so Awh. Very, very cute.
I love, love, love this. Ima go check out the rest of your stuff. You're an amazing writer!
The beginning of the story initially got me hooked, they met in one of those cutesy, lovey-dovey ways. I loved it.
This story was great, and I honestly don't have much to say other than that.
There were a few grammatical errors here and there but other than that it was amazing. Great entry.