DONT STOP NOW KEEP THE SUPRISES COMING OMG!!!!!!!OMG!!!!OMG!!!!!!!! IVE READ ABOUT 10 STORIES SO FAR AND THIS IS MOST DEFINATELY ONE OF THE BEST!!!! ITS PROBABLY THE BEST!!!!!!! UPDATE ASAP
Wow. this is really interesting and amazingly well written. Jack is sooo cute, and Alex just needs to come to terms with the fact that he's meant to be with Jack and that's why it feels soo amazing. :D!! great job!!
OMG!!!!! I love this, I wonder what Alex is going to be, well he has to fall in love with Jack...doesn't he? I am vey glad you have never had this many commenters -hugs- xD
I enjoyed, but I was put off at the fact that there is no paragraphs for people speaking, And you spell straight wrong, A few things were spelt wrong and I was put off by the story, but other wise it's pretty good.