That was really amazing! The ending gave me chills. I find it interesting when people write about these sort of disorders, as you can come up with all sorts of twists, such as like you did (Y)
It was brilliantly written, and there's very few grammatical mistakes, so even when I did come across one, it didn't really distract me. I can point them out if you'd like to fix them though? :)
It's obvious when reading your stories that you have a real talent for writing, because from what I've read besides this one at least, all your plots are interesting, original and thought-provoking. They aren't boring with description neither, yet you still manage to write so much. You really are a fantastic writer :) Keep it up! :D I can't wait to read anything else you come up with (Y)
I find it interesting when people write about these sort of disorders, as you can come up with all sorts of twists, such as like you did (Y)
It was brilliantly written, and there's very few grammatical mistakes, so even when I did come across one, it didn't really distract me. I can point them out if you'd like to fix them though? :)
It's obvious when reading your stories that you have a real talent for writing, because from what I've read besides this one at least, all your plots are interesting, original and thought-provoking. They aren't boring with description neither, yet you still manage to write so much. You really are a fantastic writer :) Keep it up! :D I can't wait to read anything else you come up with (Y)