Of All That You Could Concieve - Comments

First off, I'd like to thank you for entering my contest. (:

Immediately, the writing is amazing. The thoughts sound so natural but poetic at the same time. The relationship that the two characters have is also described beautifully. And I really liked the little mystery at the end, that you don't describe how he died and you leave it kind of vague. Although I would have preferred if the death was a little more central to the story, I really enjoyed this nonetheless. You are an amazing writer. Thank you for entering, once again. (:

i like it!
this reminds me of a relationship that i had with a friend of mine. in fact, he asked me if i believed in winged horses and flying midgets too.
a lot has changed since then, but it was still nice to read this.
in fact,ironically, i lost him, because his family had so much money i lost him. and now im using you like a phsyatrist, so i'll stop.heh. :]
but the story was good.
and if that is UNDER your expectations, i cant imagine OVER.

it showed up!! :D
And I'm sorry it doesn't seem to have met your expectations, but you went over mine. Seriously! That was beautifully written, and such a sweet story line. I felt like I was with her on the trip, going through her memories and thoughts. It was extremely poetic, and I can't find anything negative to say, because I wasn't seeing anything misspelled... maybe because he wasn't there on the plane with her. That's just wrong. But at the same time, he couldn't be. Which is sad. :/
But great job!!

hey, illusion. thanks for entering, and thanks for the link. however, the story isn't up here, so let me know when it is, okay? ;D