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  • simplyayra

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    This story makes me so giddy. It's so sweet. I can't wait for the next chapter.
    May 10th, 2012 at 01:01am
  • Its_RobynXo

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    Sweet update, loved it!
    May 7th, 2012 at 05:25am
  • Jon Toews

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    Had a lot of catching up to do, it's been a while, looooove this<3
    May 6th, 2012 at 06:04am
  • missann10

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    Love it!!!!
    May 6th, 2012 at 01:08am
  • dallasstar28

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    Go raylene! Standing up for her friends. Update soon
    May 6th, 2012 at 12:29am
  • Breakneckorange

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    Loved the update. Can't wait for more :)
    May 5th, 2012 at 10:12pm
  • Its_RobynXo

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    Great updates, looking forward to more!
    April 17th, 2012 at 06:17am
  • missann10

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    I am glad she is slowly getting better, love the update and can't wait for the next chapter :)
    April 17th, 2012 at 05:36am
  • dallasstar28

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    Can't wait for next chapter!
    February 25th, 2012 at 06:37pm
  • Its_RobynXo

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    Aw :(
    Can't wait for more!
    February 14th, 2012 at 08:10am
  • Breakneckorange

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    Upsetting of course, but I can't wait to see where they go from here
    February 14th, 2012 at 02:01am
  • simplyayra

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    This is so sad, but so good.
    February 12th, 2012 at 08:17pm
  • Its_RobynXo

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    Even though I read your other story, I can't say I'm happy with the chapter.
    January 23rd, 2012 at 03:39am
  • Breakneckorange

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    Ugh I did read your other story so I figured this is when it happened. Doesn't mean I wanted it too though :/. Either way I can't wait for more
    January 22nd, 2012 at 09:17pm
  • simplyayra

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    You're such a great writer. So many emotions. I don't know how to feel.
    January 22nd, 2012 at 04:59am
  • Breakneckorange

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    I'm at the edge of my seat. I can't wait to see what happens!
    January 18th, 2012 at 06:45am
  • Its_RobynXo

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    For someone who's a paramedic, she sure is stupid when it comes to knowing that she shouldn't be digging around in her purse to try and find a ringing phone while she's freaking driving!!
    And PLEASE for the love of all things holy, don't turn this into a cliche scenario where she loses the baby, Patrick and Adam blame themselves, Raylene blames herself, and then everyone gets depressed!
    January 17th, 2012 at 07:34pm
  • simplyayra

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    No! You can't let the chapter end with that. I want her to be okay. Agh. Too much suspense.
    January 17th, 2012 at 06:08am
  • dallasstar28

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    NO!!! PLEASE UPDATE TONIGHT! OR REALLY SOON! I need to know Adam's reaction, you should make him cry!
    January 17th, 2012 at 02:51am
  • Its_RobynXo

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    Loved the last two updates! I think she should just have twins so they both get what they want! ;)
    January 9th, 2012 at 07:36am
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