Never Felt So Beautiful - Comments

  • Dee Flyrs Grl

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    Just found this, & I love it! You did a great job!!
    September 4th, 2010 at 04:37am
  • schennsational;

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    First, thank you so much for joining my contest!

    Okay. I don't really know where to start... this... it was amazing, I'll tell you that. It was beautifully written and Ryan was such a sweetheart and really just *swoon*. Fedex him to me, will you? Haha, no but really this was just wonderful, I cannot thank you enough for joining and writing this. It gave me butterflies there at the end...

    “Stop,” He said, and I froze my movements looking up into his eyes, as I had never heard his voice so serious. “You don’t need it.” He enunciated. I shook my head. Men, they never really understood it.

    “You are beautiful.”

    “You have been saying that an awful lot.” I whispered.

    “That’s because it’s true, you are the most beautiful woman in the world, and I will tell you that everyday in every way possible.” Something in Ryan’s eyes changed. He really meant it.


    That part right there.. I got butterflies and chills and downright jealous... I want a guy to talk to me like that! It was beautiful so thank you, again, for joining and writing this!
    May 11th, 2010 at 07:32am
  • MissLis

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    oh man, I love this thing, it just makes me want to have a husband just like that too! *sniff*
    you pulled that off just... wow! especially at the end you really made me feel the realization she had about being beautiful just like she was. that was awesome
    May 9th, 2010 at 12:57am
  • xoxomusic363

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    Oh my goddness. I loved that. You should make a longer story about him :) Too cute and precious :) :D :P
    May 2nd, 2010 at 03:47am
  • Isildur'sHeir

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    OKAY I LOVE IT
    I LOVE IT
    I LOVE IT.
    i subscribed so that i can read it over and over and over again! =D
    it made my heart stop, my breath stop, and i think i almost died.
    i love it too much!
    thank you for writing this story! i love it!
    thankyouthankyouthankyouthankyou! =D
    April 26th, 2010 at 03:24am