Lemonade and Whiskey - Comments

Rayn's Vengeance6661 (100)

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omg this should b a story :o i will soooo love to know like wat happins to the dude like will he meet lots of girls or stay with the same 1 idk im just curious O.o

June 5th, 2010 at 09:48am

ForeverPlagued (100)

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Okay, you have serious skills here! Haha. Can't wait to read more!

May 31st, 2010 at 09:23am

Love. Hope. Dreams. (100)

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i thought it was awesome

April 18th, 2010 at 02:27am

goldenpuppy316 (100)

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one of the best i've read. brownie points for writing in a guy's pov! :]

April 17th, 2010 at 08:43am

kalisweetblood (100)

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i don't think the story sucked at all i think the view of losing virginity is highly unused and you wrote a beautiful depiction of what would happen
thank you
love kalisweetblood because she loved you first

April 16th, 2010 at 11:38pm

Shadowsgirl (100)

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:D
awsome!

April 16th, 2010 at 10:49pm

Doctor (100)

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Probably the only one brave enough to actually write a comment on this, but this is simply brilliant. Curiosity was depicted wonderfully here, and it wasn't just pornographic. It was much more...exploring, the kind of stuff kids do today. Also, you write very well in the point of view of a male. Not many female writers can do that effectively.

Great job.

Doctor

April 16th, 2010 at 10:46pm