Lemonade and Whiskey - Comments

omg this should b a story :o i will soooo love to know like wat happins to the dude like will he meet lots of girls or stay with the same 1 idk im just curious O.o

Okay, you have serious skills here! Haha. Can't wait to read more!

i thought it was awesome

one of the best i've read. brownie points for writing in a guy's pov! :]

i don't think the story sucked at all i think the view of losing virginity is highly unused and you wrote a beautiful depiction of what would happen
thank you
love kalisweetblood because she loved you first

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awsome!

Probably the only one brave enough to actually write a comment on this, but this is simply brilliant. Curiosity was depicted wonderfully here, and it wasn't just pornographic. It was much more...exploring, the kind of stuff kids do today. Also, you write very well in the point of view of a male. Not many female writers can do that effectively.

Great job.

Doctor