Oh my gosh, I was so happy when she bumped into Johnny! I cannot express in words how happy I was to know that she had, indeed, run into them. It just made my day, seeing them all reunited like that. And Matt: "Jimmy, put that girl down! You don't know her like that!" Haha. Like he'd be concerned. Pchah. But I absolutely adored their reunion, despite the cliffhanger and the creepy vampyre on the balcony.
And Helena is AWESOME. I love the techno-sounding part on that song. And the music video...I want that girl's dress that climbs out of the coffin and starts balleting down the aisle. Pretty awesome.
But seriously. I loved their reunion so much. Words cannot express it. LOVED IT! DESPITE THE CLIFFHANGER! He's probably just devouring Ace with his eyes.
Ha, look at that, so funny that Candace is still almost unnaturally beautiful...Yeah, definitely a hybrid. And her eyes are pretty, not creepy. She should tell herself that.
Paige...sounds....awesome. She sounds like a fun person to be around.
And Pete better back off. He needs to just back off. Because I bet, by some strange occurence, Avenged will be there and Candace will be with Pete and Zacky will not like it, just like you put it. If he even recognizes her. She has changed a lot since their teen years.
i loved this first chapter! dude i can not wait for the next one! i hope that the a7x guys are there too and that candace gets to have her sexy time with zacky! *sighs dramaticly* post soon please!
...I LOVED THIS CHAPTERR!!!!!!!!!!!! I want more too!!!!! I really hope avenged will be at the concert...what? They dont communicate or anything? Hmm POST MORE QUICK! PLEASE :)
I WANT MORE NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Anyways, to the serious stuff. I think its a great start and Candance definately has not changed much thank god:] Glad she ironed out her problems with Leana and Danielle, she has enough enemies as it is already. Team Zacky for her all the way. Hope Paige gets Matt. I'm still routing for tons of them even though I'm a Brian fan myselfXD But he's got Michelle. MOVING ON I'm so happy you decided to write a sequel and I will be reading it ASAP whenever a chapter comes out. No critique for the moment since its so early on and you seem to be doing great for the moment, so GOOD JOB, hugs, chocolate and love;]