I'm here by the comment swap, and I flipped through the entire story. It was interesting although I kind of felt like I was just scrolling through your tumblr, which considering how much I love tumblr isn't a complaint and possibly a really big compliment.
I think the one thing I think is weird is that you have this listed as Original Fiction. Why not true story?
I love this! It is so cute and funny. You write about things that are real and that lots of people can relate and agree to. It's really refreshing and fun to read. I like how the thoughts are all fairly short and quick to read. Good job:)
I like the idea of this...story, if you wanna call it that. It's really cute and quirky. The short chapters are filled with so much emotion. There's just so much to think about. I like how original this is. :) It's truly epic. Good job.
this is extremely cute. the way it's written is so attractive and i can't help but be eager to read the next thought. i can see this at a table on barnes and noble, its delectable. the occasional wittiness and the honesty are refreshing.
I Love your thoughts. O_O This would make the cutest little book about how women think or just the daily rantings of you. I would buy it :3 You should look into writing a book. I think you would get far with that imagination. :D
And I also was in love with Nick Jonas at one point. He was so cute. :D