This is literally the third time that I've read this story.... It's just amazing it's like that favorite book you can't stop reading! This is just awesome!!! It deserves a sequel!! <3
OMG I JUST REALIZED YOU! ONE OF MY FAV FRIGGIN AUTHORS WROTE THIS! DO YOU KNOW HOW LOOOOOONG I'VE BEEN LOOKING FOR THIS!?!? UGH IM SOOOO HAPPY! YAYZ :D
This is just one of those stories I can come back to and read over and over again and still get the same reaction as the first time (: just thought I'd let you know that, even after all this time x) Actually this is, like legit, one of the very first slashes I'd ever read if not the first. ( it's a tie between another one of yours and someone else's, I can't remember that far back). Look at me now (; it's a chain reaction!! Haha just wanted to say, thanks for writing this in the first place (:
Wow . . . WOW . . . that was simply . . . MAGNIFICENT!!!! I had such an amazing time reading this. I love how you portrayed Arson, so real, I feel like he's my older cousin. And the realness but not stereotype of him having a daughter, and BRYCE: the white boy from the hood? This was just so amazing! There's too much for me to even say. It made me laugh, smile, and even tear up a bit. You are an amazing writer, if only for this story! Another one you could publish now, (if you added a bit to the end . . . :) My only disappointment was the abrupt ending, but that's mostly because I didn't want it to end!!! Wow, this is by far the realest and best slash I have ever read. I love Arson! I feel like there's so much more to say, but I can't word it. YOU ARE AMAZING!!!! :) Seriously.
i liked this story , i really did , but one thing i did notice : wheres the drama/action ?? i mean this story was really sweet and all, but it seemed as if everyone got what they wanted right away, not havong to work for it, but then again i read through the whole story in a matter of hours , so i dont know how long you made readers wait in between chapters. alright well all in all FANTASTIC story (; i really did enjoy it. and the ending wasnt crap , it was sweet (: thanx forba AWESOME story that was definitley worth my time(:
I LOVED IT! Perfectly written for me. I like it<3 I legitly couldn't believe you wrote this when I read it No offence, I've just not read alot by you. This was truly wonderful. You have talent, Nicole.<3 Kinda want a sequel.... You should do something with the kids! :x
You are soooooooooooooo welcome!! Your writing is amazing!!