As I Fall - Comments

KrAAAzy Good! (100)

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yay! thanks guys!

i think I WIll

December 11th, 2007 at 01:47pm

OHkristina. (100)

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:OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
this story is amazing.(:
and you should DEFFINITELY make a sequel.
:D

December 11th, 2007 at 03:26am

chrissie. (250)

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I love this. I think it's pure genius.
=]

December 10th, 2007 at 05:19pm

TorturedWings (100)

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the best one-shot i've ever read! awesome!
very well written

December 1st, 2007 at 08:46pm

A Perfect Sonnet (100)

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The descricption doesn't do it justice. It is so much more interesting than it shows.

I like how it says that they had normal lives and were happy like most people and then the mood changes.
The descirption on the beatings and is pretty interesting. It's not all senslessly dramatic and over the top, but just enough to provoke a bit of fear :]

The end lines were lovely. In death they shall be together, it reminds me of something.

I really liked it. Well written.

November 21st, 2007 at 01:38pm

hilariousity (100)

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Whoa....that was excellent.
But seriously disturbing.
Good work!

November 21st, 2007 at 12:54pm

Monkey-Turtle (100)

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That is seriously freaky...

You have huge writing potential.

This is one of the saddest and most compelling one-shots I have ever read.

10/10 from me.

November 21st, 2007 at 12:41pm