HAHAHHAHAHA xD i LOVED the end xD was mikey not supposed to know about their relationship? that was good for a first sex scene. i haven't written one yet, so i can't really judge on that, but i liked it :D i'll be reading more of ur stories now, since it's 1 AM and i sleep at 5...
awww this was cute and hot i like it it was very good for a frist sex scene :) whenever i re-read my first im like, omg :/ but this one's really good :) id love for more like this!