I just started reading, and I'm really liking this a lot. :] Brian and Zack are my favorite pairing, so when I saw you were writing this, it definitely made me happy. I can't wait for more!! Hopefully it's soon.[: <3
I'm really not a constant commenter, but I'll try my hardest. They kissed! :3 Brian was a total sweetheart about it really, but the fact that he fell asleep was hilarious. Poor ZV. He sounded pretty off as he left though, is there going to be a problem? D:
Ooh! Even though I'm happy 'cause they kissed and almost did something else, I want to punch Brian as hard as I can. He passed out on top of Zacky? HOW COME? He had the golden chance, the chance everyone wants to have: to be on top of Zachary James Baker, kissing and going for more. Anyone would be wide awake, it doesn't matter how drunk the one could be. But he passed out and missed that chance! Well Brian, you might as well had given that chance to me, I would do a good use of it (even though I'm a girl and I can't technically be on top of a guy, but who cares?). I'm curious about how they'll act after what happened (and not happened, thanks to Brian). Update soon, please!
O.o :D YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Haha so you finally decided to update? THANK YOU! <3 I love you! haha. Even though I'm not the biggest fan of baseball itself, I loved the way you described it and got me into the game. And the Jimmohnny? Frickin' amazing :P Can't wait for more!
A great start, and I love the interaction between the boys. :DD You write so well. And like before I love the baseball explanations for n00bs like me. Pretty much, I'm mega excited for this story. ;)
Ohh, loved it! I agree with the one above, Zacky's character sounds adorable XD And Brian seems already caught by him xD I'm so looking forward the next chapter!!!