Billiards. - Comments

I really liked this!
It was really well written.
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TYPPPPPPPPPO!

that's embarrassing. some*
;)

You're silly. This is actually pretty good, I say. I love how much detail you go into when it comes to Dean and his undeniable skill at pool. And how Sammy can't, for the life of him, even begin to understand the simple game, due to Dean's unbeknownst antics.

You use a lot of run-ons, though, ahaha. You try to fit as much as possible just with somae commas slapped down. XD S'all good, though.
Dean had racked up enough
Should that be raked, instead? [:

I love you, and this is gooood, but if you stil want to rewrite it and everything, then...shewt. :D
ANDICAN'TWAITFORPARTTWO.
<3

p.s: go me? I actually didn't become bothered by their names. heheyayay. :3