Fool Proof - Comments

You know, when I read the summary I didn't expect a fake marriage to happen. But I was pleasantly suprised. I like it. A lot. And I'm excited for more.

This is very interesting. Can't wait for the next update.

oh this is going to be good!!
A fake marriage! Classic! i love it(:

this story is very interesting...i'm quite intrigued by it. :D

I love this type of story. The ones where there are scheme type of plans just so others can back off...The question is if they will actually fall for each other?

:) Awesome update!

Im excited to see where this goes. !! Love the story so far ;D

Yes! Love it<3

thankyouthankyouthankyou for updating!
this story is awesome

Wow didn't see that coming. :D It was amazing, excited for the next chapter :)

S.Shadows

Totally didn't know where this story was going but now I do. It's fucking awesome!

And the game is on :D Got me hooked already. Keep it up. I'll wait however long it takes for ya'll to update it. Its totally worth it. I can't wait to see how this blows up in their faces. Call me pessimestic but it'll happen but they'll get through it. And who knows....maybe they'll actually fall for each other in the process. It's highly possible. I mean who WOULDN'T fall for Brian? Exactly.

Update soon please!

That was amazing. =D

OMG I love the story..the very idea of just randomly proposing to someone you barely know made me giggle.....LOVE IT...*subscribe

This is gonna be insane, and I love it!

I did not see that coming :) Can't wait for more

love can't wait to read more

Ohhhh this is starting to sound reallllllllllly good and I LIKE IT ALOT!!! So excited for some more chapters, soon? :)

wooohooo poor brian allll alone

I really like this. Can't waitt for more<3