I really like this story. As of now I'm reading five of your guys' stories...well put together...along with all your stories I've read in the past....Anyways can't wait for another update!
Great update, Whitney! You write very well in a man's POV, and that is meant as a compliment. I wish I could write as well as you do like that; I can't do it to save my life. Haha. But it was very nice seeing inside Brian's head, and I'm really lookin' forward to more! :)