Fool Proof - Comments, page 3

MamaZ (100)

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They are so freaking cute together. I love how Brain truly cares about her and wants her to be comfortable. Their wedding is going to be beautiful, even if it is fake. I just wish they would see that they both should really be together.

February 19th, 2012 at 05:08pm

Mrs Synyster Gates (100)

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Now see this is one I love so much I would take it to bed with me and re-read every day. Please update at least once a month :) It's just so good!

February 19th, 2012 at 08:13am

Mrs Synyster Gates (100)

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Now see this is one I love so much I would take it to bed with me and re-read every day. Please update at least once a month :) It's just so good!

February 19th, 2012 at 08:13am

brianna7x (100)

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Awhhhh that was so cute. I love the fact that Brian is the one bringing all the wedding stuff up, haha.

February 19th, 2012 at 08:06am

life.ruiners (100)

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on his birthday? cute. and i cant wait to see what happens next? some lovey-dovey shit? or some smut? endless possibilities

February 19th, 2012 at 04:53am

Fictional.Reality (100)

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They are so cute!
I hope she truly quits her job, it is wearing her down
<3 Michele

February 19th, 2012 at 04:37am

Aaugustin (100)

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Moreeeeeeeeeeee :)

February 12th, 2012 at 06:47pm

killingmesweetly (100)

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I love it please please update soon!

January 27th, 2012 at 08:27pm

brianna7x (100)

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Well as late as this is....haha. That last chapter was so cute!

January 23rd, 2012 at 07:22am

MemoriesMakeMe (100)

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Can't wait for the next chapter!

January 16th, 2012 at 05:09pm

catcraz826 (100)

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Awesome chapter can't wait for more!!!!!!!!!!

December 21st, 2011 at 12:13am

choirgirlx3 (100)

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Update soon? You are talented! I like it!

December 19th, 2011 at 04:28pm

choirgirlx3 (100)

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Update soon? You are talented! I like it!

December 19th, 2011 at 04:28pm

NothingIsPermanent (100)

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Love this story! So goood!

December 18th, 2011 at 06:43pm

life.ruiners (100)

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Oh Brian. how adorable.

December 18th, 2011 at 05:30pm

MamaZ (100)

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Awes, Brian's falling for her and it's soooooo cute. He seems like the perfect man to marry.

December 18th, 2011 at 05:27pm

Mrs Synyster Gates (100)

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All I can say is I love this amazing story.

December 18th, 2011 at 02:30pm

Fictional.Reality (100)

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Brent seems like a sweetheart and it's even better that he got along with Whitney
I hope the rest of his family reacts the same way
<3 Michele

December 18th, 2011 at 02:03pm

Its_RobynXo (100)

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Something should happen..haha can't wait for more! <3

December 18th, 2011 at 07:02am

Gypsy Traveler (100)

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yay!!! he finally realized it and i have a feeling so did whitney cuz she got nervous asking him :D

December 18th, 2011 at 06:20am