Prom Night Secrets - Comments

I liked how you ended this. The end gives off the feeling that there will be more chapters to come but the whole chapter doesn't. It's a great combination that worked to your advantange. *high five*

I liked how you ended this. The end gives off the feeling that there will be more chapters to come but the whole chapter doesn't. It's a great combination that worked to your advantange. *high five*

I liked this a lot. I thought his deepest secret would be a bit different, though. More... I don't know, I guess darker?

This was really cute, though. I liked your descriptions, and the way that it all flowed, even when you skipped to the next scene. Too many times the change is really jarring, but it wasn't here.

You did a good job. :]

I have to say, very intriguing. for my pre-write, i said I don't read stories like this. So I nearly stopped- but I'm glad I didn't. because it did turn out very cute in the end. It was nearly cliche, but everything fit together in a little cute puzzle.
You have talent! There was decent grammar, spelling and decent dialogue if a bit short. But it was very cute and the two characters were just.... adorable. :D great job!

The was very cute. The ending was solid && it made me smile.
One thing I have to say though, all three of the stories I commented are entered in my contest, the Lovely Pre-Writes Contest, && it states in the rules that you're supposed to put a link to my contest in the summary, and I have yet to see that link in any of your entries. If you'd please add it to them, that'd be great. Here's the link ---> http://www.mibba.com/forums/topic/156473/
Thanks for you entry.

Another amazing story Diana :) <3

The ending was perfect! :)
I enjoyed reading it; helped me get a bit closer into the mind of a guy. I'm so close to finally understanding just a bit of them...
This made me swoon. I'm never going to be able to look at my gay-guy friend the same way again... XD

It was a wonderful little story. Thanks for entering my contest! :)