How The Earth Imploded - Comments

Haha, thanks. :D
I shall. ^.^

This is the start of something great, I can feel it! ^^
Of course he, the bus driver, would get hit by a bus... it's perfectly logical.
The only real logical way he could have died.
This entire idea is so out of the norm, that I'm just completely taken with it.
I hope you continue ^^
Write on!
xD (laughs at the corniness of that statement)

You need to paragraph the text so that it's easier to read.

This is actually pretty funny to me, (in a good way of course.) I like God's personality a lot also. It's rather, pleasant... I hope to see more in the future! Good luck.