Thank you so much BreathinElectrically for your comment. It is the kindest comment I have ever gotten for this story. Thank you so much! It made my day.
Simplicity works in your favor especially with this story, you know how to hook readers with far less than what most people write. I really like the premise of this story and the fact that it is easy to read and to follow. It's actually one of the first one many of the sites I have posted on that caught my attention and kept my attention. In case you aren't following, I'm praising your work. Haha. So good work, keep it up, good luck, etc, etc. (:
Wow. Really good, however, I would change when you put the dots in two's "..", and put them in three's. Not really important but I find it useful ;D I love the idea, pirates rule! And ugly lip licking man needs a new life. No. A life, period XD meaaaannyyy.