I have a love of contradictions so you can tell that I liked this story. I liked how you described things in the beginning. I loved one paragraph in this story and it was the paragraph where she realized why she couldn't agree with herself. This story made my day. You made a mistake in the first paragraph though, you put: "It was any fun." I'm pretty sure you meant wasn't. Great job.
I liked how you described things in the beginning.
I loved one paragraph in this story and it was the paragraph where she realized why she couldn't agree with herself.
This story made my day.
You made a mistake in the first paragraph though, you put: "It was any fun." I'm pretty sure you meant wasn't.
Great job.