Dreaming Of Heaven. - Comments

whiskey lullaby. (100)

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I really enjoyed this short story. I love the way you wrote her background by giving exact dates and very brief explanations. There were a few grammar and spelling mistakes that I was itching to fix, but it was easy to ignore them because the plot completely envelops the reader, or at least it did with me. It takes cliche to a beautiful level and I loved reading it.

Nice job! =)

November 11th, 2010 at 03:04pm

purple haze. (220)

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This is a really wonderful piece!
I love the change of emotions, it runs smoothly throughout the whole piece, and it's something that is usually hard to do - but you do it well!
I love your writing style

So inspiring!

July 3rd, 2010 at 02:04pm

southpaw (565)

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This was so sad at the beginning, but the ending was really sweet. I like your writing style; it seems like it's being told in the form of a diary, making references to people in her past briefly. Did I mention that it was sweet? Elijah's awesome.

May 11th, 2010 at 12:20am

Napolean (100)

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This was sad and sweet and beautiful!
I loved it.

May 9th, 2010 at 11:21pm

Smashy.Is.Fishy.Duck (100)

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AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO CUTE!!!!!!!!!
I <3 it :D

April 20th, 2010 at 06:41am