Portrait d'un condamné à mort. - Comments

J'ai trouver cet histoire vraiment fantastique. Et bien franchement, j'ai toujours eu de la difficultée a comprendre des textes français, malgré le fait que ces ma langue maternelle XD J'ai aimer comment tu as décrit l'émotion du personnage. Pour être franche, j'ai pas trouver de fautes, qui est pas mal normale pour moi, mais en générale j'ai bien aimer ceci.

I liked it, although i understood very little, what i could understand was great :)
I love french so i am reading anything french just because it helps you learn faster? :)

Grand début! J'ai hâte de lire plus.

j'était plutôt ému par ton histoire! malgré les erreurs, ça m'a plaît à lire une histoire dans la plus belle langue! :)

This was really good, a lot better than I thought any non-English story on this site. There were a couple grammatical mistakes but not very many high is really good for you not having re-read it. I think you got the right feeling down, I sorta got the feel like I was a prisoner along with him. I really liked that you mentioned there being no mirror. It's a little detail that a lot of people may not have thought of.
Good job.

that was really good!! your an awesome writer in French and in English!! it was very descriptive and much better than anything could ever dream of writing in that language. I'm envious of your talent!!