Spooks - Comments

Whenever I read your stories, I find my words best said throughout smilies. You have some seriously amazing talent brewing in you, my dear.

First, the layout was absolutely adorable. The picture was so cute I wanted to die. I mean, they're so adorable!

The story started out so simple and sweet, and I was instantly pulled into their little Halloween night. I love how you always refer to them as the red-head and the blonde, I'm not sure why. I just think it's so cute.

Anyways, I love Roxas in this. I love his little tale about the hard candy in his hair when he was five. That is just such a Roxas thing to have happen. And I love how Axel just has to hear the story, just for his own entertainment. It's so awww-worthy. And how Roxas is so blunt about it, especially with his little "sue me" line.

Plus, I find it amazing that they're in Halloween Town, seeing as it is Halloween after all. I love Halloween Town and Jack is so amazing, so of course I was ecstatic when you included him as well.

I love the idea of having the story telling contest, too, because it helped to build up to the ending... which... was... well, I'll get to that later. Anyways, Axel's story was actually pretty spooky, I'll admit. And, it was perfect that he won... because...

The ending. Oh my, the ending. I love how it ended, with Axel's emotions going so wild that he eventually just gave up and cornered Roxas. I mean... Yes, it was so amazing. It couldn't have ended better either, with that one last sentence.

Overall, it was seriously the cutest most adorable thing EVER! I'm in love with your writing, m'dear. This was just so cute and amazing and awesome and cool and spectacular and fantastic and... I think you get the point.

Great job!

I just want to start by saying that the layout for this is so cute. :3

Again, your description is pretty much flawless.
He held his bucket with a gloved hand, trying to keep hold of it as the symphony of chuckles escaped his lips.
The way you described Axel's laughter was brilliant.
Their personalities are perfect. The story Axel told was awesome, and pretty creepy.
This story is so cute; I love it.

Naww.
So cute.

I love the story Axel told. So friggin awesome.
I knew it wouldn't be implied! TOLD YOU IT WAS BETTER THAT WAY

Anyway I loved it Sempai.
So awesome!

That was quite the treat. ;)

But seriously, the cuteness factor was through the roof!
And I actually had a little chill reading the part with the scary story.
And, like a favorite candy at the end of a long night of trick-or-treating, you added a little something-something to the end. I loved it.