I love it! It's so original and interesting. I love the sci-fi effect of it, and how "Briana" came to be. The paragraphs time speeding up was a little confusing, but I liked it. It showed how fast she was fitting in, up until the accident. I liked how Josh didn't really care that she was a robot, and wanted to protect her secret. I found two typos, though I can only mention one because I can't find the other one.
She feel in gym
This was really well thought out, and I adore it. Thanks so much Ash!
It's so original and interesting. I love the sci-fi effect of it, and how "Briana" came to be.
The paragraphs time speeding up was a little confusing, but I liked it. It showed how fast she was fitting in, up until the accident.
I liked how Josh didn't really care that she was a robot, and wanted to protect her secret.
I found two typos, though I can only mention one because I can't find the other one.
She feel in gym
This was really well thought out, and I adore it. Thanks so much Ash!