When It's Wrong, When It's Right - Comments

so gooood!! except, i can't believe john is giving in and agreeing to take her... or is he? is he making her pack her backs and he's gonna lock her up so she can't go anywhere?? haha.
not but seriously, so good!! i'm pretty sure you can stretch this out to five!!!! :)

holy wow. sooooo not what i was expecting!!! yet so good at the same time.
i can't wait to see what john thinks of all of this!!

Whooooooooo is ready to see how John reacted to that?

ME.

i REAAAALLY hope you continue this. even if it is just the four or five chapters you were thinking.
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OH MY FUCKING HELL.
ALEXA, YOU ARE SUCH A TEASE.
Every damn story you write, it's like "ohhaii, Melanie, listen up, read this, it's fabulous, and look here's some information---oh wait, jk, end of chapter, SUCK ON THAT BABY."
And that last line? You're just demanding a swallow.
Fuuuuckkk.
I don't even know what to have you update anymore.
Other than, y'know, EVERYTHING.

Once I'm done with school, I'mma bribe the shit outta you, girlie.

oh. well.

Damn girl, you really don't fuck around when it comes to giving us readers a dynamic first chapter. I was expecting something stupid to bitch about with this chick, like she called John crying about something lame like her best friend who she was secretly in love with just decided he liked men or something.
Believe me, I was prepared to judge the shit out of her (because, that's like.. my job at this point)
But shit, I can't judge some bitch who's legit suffering.

“Veronica, tell me what’s going on. You’re crying, it’s past midnight. Come on.”
I think this whole "John Oh is a super sweetheart and caring individual" idea is turning me on right now. Too much info? I don't care, I'm a truth teller

“You don’t get it, John,” I whispered. “I told her to.”
Here begins the judging... kinda.
I tell my friends to kill themselves all the time, but we kid. If they actually did it I would probably shit my pants and lock myself in my room to die. And I can guarantee you that I'd be smoking more than 2 packs of cigarettes, and then I'd more than likely move on to something more potent and illegal than tobacco.

But having dealt with suicide more time's than I'd like to have, I can somewhat relate on a not so realistic level (considering I never 'told them to')
So fucking curious to see where this goes, or where she goes seeing as she's desperate to leave.
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