Can't You Feel It? You're In Deep... - Comments

  • Eliot Spencer

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    Interesting! Love it so far and can't wait to see what happens next!
    May 28th, 2012 at 07:49pm
  • Eliot Spencer

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    Interesting! Love it so far and can't wait to see what happens next!
    May 28th, 2012 at 07:49pm
  • sammie101119

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    Omg i love it!! ahhhh dean is too perfect
    September 28th, 2011 at 12:44pm
  • kristinvengeance

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    very good story. More soon please :)
    June 4th, 2010 at 03:50am
  • Raine.Storm

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    lol i know i will have the next one up tomorrow morning, scouts honor!
    May 19th, 2010 at 06:32am
  • WhisperTragedy

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    Hun, you NEED to update!!!!!
    I've been waiting forever!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Pweaseee?
    May 18th, 2010 at 12:51am
  • Raine.Storm

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    i will by the end of tonight. sorry about the grammer i was never good at it that is why zoey is doing it she just has alot of her own storys so it will take her a while to get all the chapters done. hang in there with us, we thank you so much!!!!!!!!
    May 12th, 2010 at 09:10pm
  • KateValentine

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    Love the story.... the grammer confused me a little in places... but I love it anyways!!!! Btw... UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    May 12th, 2010 at 04:19pm
  • Raine.Storm

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    Oh, me too. i would kill myself trying to get out.
    May 10th, 2010 at 12:48pm
  • WhisperTragedy

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    I WOULD HATE TO WAKE UP IN A LOCKED CASKET!!!!!!!!
    Creepy as fuck, man!
    May 9th, 2010 at 10:03pm
  • Raine.Storm

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    lol yeah i know he will be better promise. i will put another chapter up before i go to bed but it's another cliffy sorry
    May 3rd, 2010 at 12:44am
  • WhisperTragedy

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    Yayy!
    You updated!!!

    Dude, Dean's a stupid little bee-with-an-itch jerk face!
    "I think we're meant to be friends" my ass!!!!
    May 3rd, 2010 at 12:21am
  • WhisperTragedy

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    Omg! You little bitch!
    How could you leave me with a cliffhanger like that?
    That's all I'll be thinking about tonight, now!

    Is he gonna get in the shower with her? Or pull her out of it?
    April 30th, 2010 at 01:39am
  • Raine.Storm

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    there is the new chapter lol you better be glad i like you lol jk.
    April 30th, 2010 at 01:06am
  • Raine.Storm

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    lol okay but i wont be able to put one up tomorrow.
    April 30th, 2010 at 12:58am
  • WhisperTragedy

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    Will you update tonight?
    Before eight?
    Pleaseeeeeeee!? *pouts*

    I'll edit some more...
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    April 30th, 2010 at 12:39am
  • Raine.Storm

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    yeah i seen that after i posted that chapter sorry
    April 25th, 2010 at 02:22pm
  • IntroducingMe!!

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    great plot line

    got me alittle confused with the steak/stake thing
    April 25th, 2010 at 01:32pm
  • Raine.Storm

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    thank you very much, yes i have a a few chapters written out already. i will edit, i just didn't want to spend alot of time on it if no one liked it, i could br working on another story instead ya know. thank you soo much though.
    April 24th, 2010 at 01:49am
  • WhisperTragedy

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    This is pretty good.
    Nice plot.
    You need to edit it, though.
    A lot of grammer mistakes...

    Update?

    hehehehe...
    I stole your comment virginity!
    Smiley
    April 24th, 2010 at 01:33am