My Heart in His Fingerless Gloved Hand - Comments

I wanna know Rezin... I wish he was real lol
More soon please, i know its been forever since i commented, ive been busy and had broken laptop and shizz.
MORE PLEASE?!?!?!

One thing that seems to kill people's ideas and give them writer's block is when they start telling a story instead of showing us what's happening. Writing things out with more detail can help get your ideas going; instead of typing sentences full of backstory, show the characters' personalities and quirks through their actions so we can see it all in context and get a better feel of what they're like. It gets easier with practice and it's a great way to shove writer's block off a cliff shortly before smashing it with a car.

That said, I'm really glad you updated and I loved the chapter. Your character isn't a complete idiot like most, but she also doesn't know everything (or think she does), so she's much more realistic than most characters I've seen. My earlier statements still stand. I really love this story and I look forward to reading more.

i've seen this story before, but not on here.

On MCMB, you a member?

I liked it!!! And it wasnt confusing changing her name! More please!!!

wow i really like this story, u write really well. update soon.

Aim... goth, you haven't updated for over 30 days! I don't know the exact number but its definitely a nig number. So please find some time to update.

And when the hell did you ever come to think you're a failure? Seriously my twin cannot be a failure.

Everything about your story is amazing, and I wants more. -pouts- so update! You don't wanna upset me do ya?

i love this story, i want more!!!

*is now subscribed* I'm impressed! A real, original fic! And a well written one, too! Wow, I'm really liking it. And I love how this girl is NEW to music. We've all been there before... I like it a lot.

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Wow, that was a big statement. ^

You don't know how much it means to me. At least I know I'm not a TOTAL failure. Hon, you're too freaking kind.

Thanks for all who commented. I'm glad you like it. :]

-Aim

No, I'm serious. This is a great story. You're not even close to being a failure.

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Wow, that was a big statement. ^

You don't know how much it means to me. At least I know I'm not a TOTAL failure. Hon, you're too freaking kind.

Thanks for all who commented. I'm glad you like it. :]

-Aim

*jaw falls off and drops to floor*

This is incredible. I'm serious. Your character isn't some fake Mary Sue that no one will give half a care about; she's real. She has real fears and problems.

To be honest, I think there's a little bit of her in all of us.

Your writing pwns the world. It's official.

I love it! =D

I don't think it's clichéd, at leat I've never read anything like it before. Is Mr No-Name the busker? that would be cool.
woo! update again soon
*subscribes*
susie x

Nice Update, I'm excited! I wanna know what happens next...*Whines*
Woo! Little dances* Update!!
Gee
xx

ooohhhhh interesting i likey alot keep it up!!
xoxo

Wow, Its amazing. I so need more. Update. Its really well written. I wonder who it is? What is the peice of paper? I wanna know!! Its brill. & me's subscribing!

xxx
Gee