Oh my god that was awesome! I can't believe they kidnapped her!! And I'm glad Bella felt guilty for not giving Belle equal attention! I feel so bad for Edward though!
love the story and love the fact that there like arent any f-bombs in it.... stories can be good people without the swears words!!!!!!!!!!!!! but i LOVE the story! Wish Stephanie Meyer could of thought about a twin for Nessie!
Now, what would be better, actually having the Volturi come or not? Either way, at least one person is going to die. Irina, and have the Denali coven try and start a fight, or Belle, and having the Olympic coven and wolves start a war.
sorry, that ~*you say im stupid thing*~ i forgot to take off. My sister was messing around on my thing and put that on there, sorry dont pay attention to it.
Hey! Keep up the good work! Oh, if you want me to, I'm pretty good with spelling and grammar and things like that, and I can help you with your story! :D Anyway, hope you update soon!