Tear - Comments

Wow! I absoloutely adored the first one!! The end! That would actually be quite an interesting story I think. :)
The second one wasnt quite as good as the first but still amazing, these are your best yet I think, well done :D

4) ooooh, mysterious! this was very good, i liked the description of the apples, tiny and sour. This was very different, well done.

I loved this, the last sentence was so eerily beautiful (haha my cliche words) and you gave us an inkling before you finally told us what was so strange.

2) aww, i felt so sorry for the little boy! i can just imagine that little scene in my head!

aww, this was really good (love the layout by the way). the poem at the beginning was really good and really added to the feel of the story :)