This is so cute, I'd never thought she would be the with the upper hand. I thought Gar would kiss her but it was so cute :) Loved this update and I'm anxious to know what Garrett has planned for their date.
beautiful! I bet she didn't imagine herself one day driving in that yellow Chevy with Garrett like she was. and I'm kind of glad she didn't kiss him, because it would have been too soon.
omg ok. This is so awesome. I love your writing style, and just.. damn it, this is awesome. I'm sorry I can't provide any constructive comments. It's just great.
Jesus Christ on a bike I was excited to read this. Like I knew something special was going go happen, and even though it wasn't a kiss it was just as good. I like a slower pace anyway :)
“Why don’t you think we ever bumped into each other earlier?” What, so he could have gotten freaky with her in the locker rooms in high school? I think so. Either way I'm glad he's at least acknowledging that he's a dumbass (yes, I'm blaming him for not noticing her)
*sigh* What I would give just to be able to talk to G for hours in the park about music. Chipotle being an added extremely perfect bonus.
It's the little details in this that always get me going. And for once I don't want to stab your lead female -- she better not screw that up :)
I really don't have a clue where this is going, but that makes it even more exciting. your chapters are so personal; I can't think of any other word to describe them. I could picture that last chapter so easily. it was great, now how about some more? ;D
oh god your story is SO INSANELY ACCURATE, like my second semester senior year / the summer before college to a T. i specifically remember the first book i read for pleasure after college applications, etc. and just being like what... the... fuck... am i doing? so weird. and not wanting to hang out with anyone all summer, because what's the point?