Wanna Play? - Comments

Wow, that was amazing.
It was so descriptive and interesting.

Wow, I thought this was excellent.
I don't tend to read a lot on mibba, especially PWP but I thought this was phenominal.
It was well written, carefully written out and within the sex scene there wasn't anything to make the reader cringe due to the way it was written.
I don't know anything about the pairing, but you've made the characters your own.
Well Done.

Welll that's PWP and PWP is not that much fun for me buuuut it was well written so I liked it.
My fav part of all of it was that sentence in Swedish. That's just so hot :DD
Also, the unusual pairing... I approve of it, hahah. Candle play is pretty sexy thingggg :)

I couldn't wait, I just had to read now

*wipe drool from corner of mouth and sigh contently* Wow. I seriously had to keep myself from drooling, and try to sit still in my seat. It didn't work.

The way you built the tension up was almost unbearable, “I'd definitely love to play with you,”, made me giggle and smirk, and making me more excited for the sex scene, which you wrote incredibly hot, I love the pain/pleasure line, and you make hot wax sound pleasurable for god's sake!

I also love how you brought in Swedish, and I can clearly hear Whip's sexy voice in my ear, and see his smirk.

I can almost feel Whip hand on myself as he turns William around, and it feels great;)

You make the reader very present in the story, able to feel, hear and see everything.

The ending was amazing as always, I love endings which suggest more meetings like previous moments, they make sexy images flow my mind.
I love the whole thing, you are an amazing writer babe!