Best story ever. :) I cannot wait for the next chapter! I have decided to comment every time you upload now, because you deserve more comments. Anyway, so, so glad Nick and Shannon made up. <3 Even though (SPOILER) Ryan had to die :( :( Well done, you're an awesome writer!!
I'm anxious to find out what happened! What's wrong with Nick?! I loved how Toby fell asleep on the floor! Lol! I can't wait for Nick's p.o.v by the way! Thanks for another great chapter! :)
That was an amazing chapter!!!It was very lengthy, which I absolutely loved! I couldn't stop laughing when Toby picked up Shannon like a piece of luggage. :) Another favorite scene was a cute and drunk Nick. I am happy Peter and everyone else has someone, but what about the loyal, and fun loving Mark? Anyways thank you for the chapter and I wish you a Happy Birthday for Wednesday!!! :)
I love the realism in this chapter! I love how they didn't just "kiss and make-up"! They have to slowly build up that trust again! Though I feel bad for both parties, one more than the other, I know it's going to take time.I also didn't like Ben in this chapter, though he kind of made a point, he was being heartless. Anyways thank you for another awesome chapter! :)
Sorry it was a typo/mistake...insert Shannon's name LOL! I feel no sympathy towards Natalie, she's basically in the same category as Lee! I just think you make your character's and feelings realistic which I love about this story and I can't wait for the next confrontation between Shannon and Nick :)
I just feel bad for Natalie. She tries to go out and have fun, but is attacked, how sad. :( But I did enjoy seeing Ben again. I like his character! Anyways thanks for the update! I can't wait to see what happens when she returns home!
First I am glad you are back! This chapter was heartbreaking to read, but it had to happen. I feel so bad for Shannon, everything she said to him is true. It could have been prevented! I also think it' s terrible that she has to live with him and see him everyday now. Shannon needs some type of time away from him to think. Vacation? Maybe?Anyways thanks for the update and can't wait for the next one! :)